The Cool City maybe the best solution, to this global crisis that we are facing in today’s world. Transportation and Building are the most CO2 produce. Since time we as humans have adapted to climate change, but if we don’t reach a solution on how to deal with this current issue then the world we now maybe lost forever. Masdar city which is in Abu Dhabi is one of these cities. In this essay I am going to argue about some issue of these cities.

The pollution and gas emission that we are causing the earth will have an effect not only on our lives but the future generation as well. But the problem is that the pollution will increase and the cool cities will not be able to hold all the people .Moreover high pollution means more need of huge power of electricity in order to assist their life which is not able in cool cities.
The life style will be totally different in transportation in the cool cities. With the time proceeding the Monorail system will inspire more people to leave there cars and take public transportation. They will also be looking into more multi-modal options for transportation using cars work with a new catalytic converter which reduce harmful gases and fuel consumption, (Cavanaugh).

However it s so expensive to live in the cool city because of the solar energy .As (gregor) said Solar power is getting more affordable as technologies improve. But it's still very expensive that means poor people would not have the chance to live there.
In conclusion I agree with the idea of cool city solving the global warming but I think it does not suite all the society.
Bibliography:
Cavanaugh, James. "Why My City is Cool." Cool Cities. 1 Dec. 2007. 6 May 2009
http://www.coolcities.us/cityProfiles.php?city=1428&state=AZ.
Gregor, Katherine. "Cool City: Solar Subtleties." The Austin Chronicle. 6 Mar. 2009. 6 May 2009
http://www.austinchronicle.com/gyrobase/Issue/story?oid=oid%3A751802.

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Hi Ahmed,
ReplyDeleteThis essay is long enough, and your bibliography looks great. However, your writing lacks coherence. I can not catch your main ideas.
So many things do not fit together. For example, the tiny graph about population trends has nothing to do with the paragraph where it is placed. You have found interesting articles about the cities of Austin and Goodyear, but they have nothing to do with the city of Masdar. Similarly, many sentences have good grammar, but the words just don't fit together to make clear ideas.
Please plan to meet with me regularly so that I can help you complete this course. I'd be glad to help you in advance of the marking deadline. Now it is too late to change this.